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In the end of May

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I just didn't wanted to end this month without doing something about May :) , so I ended up rushing and marathoning Yu-gi-oh Abridged while doing this xD.

As always~ any Kind of donation feedback would be a apreciated a lot, so let me know if you think I'm getting better or want me to comment on some of your artwork :D


Self Apreciation :  I think I saturated the picture in light ~ _ ~, but by the time I realized that I couln't really turn back *sigh*
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This is a beautiful artwork! It caught my eye with it’s nice and shiny colour scheme. For my point of view, the whole composition is well balanced. You created an interesting pose and the background, the bubbles looks amazing. It will be interesting to know the story behind the character (is she related to the anime? I googled it but still not sure).

 

The lineart looks very carefully done. As for the anatomy, I have a question for her right arm – is she pressing it to her body? If yes, than maybe the palm should be a bit darker, as it’s placed further, than the elbow. I like how you added the shadows to her body, arms and hair, but the shadow on her left foot is confusing. I suggest working with them the way you did on the ball - to place shadows according to the shape of the object. The picture will get more volume.

 

Her eyes are gorgeous, I like that you chose dark blue for the pupils. There may be needed more work with her hair, but I’m not sure, what result you wanted to have here – more realistic, where every lock is drawn (or like you made on your ‘Rainbow sphere’ picture), or anime-style, like on your ‘Melissa’ drawing?

 

Overall, I really like you drawings, they have great colour sсhemes and I saw a lot of good backgrounds on your pictures, too. Good luck with your further works!

 

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